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Anywhoo, I've been pndering the idea of animating "A Dangerous Path." from teh warrior's series.
and this would be in the opening, I suppose. c:
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Good-
Background
Smoothness

Bad-
Eyes kinda big
Doesn't have another ear
Grass doesn't move

now i have to fit 80 words to finish this so i will type random things
Spam Fork Dog Eat No Oh my gosh I hate my life
SHE'S GOT A LOVE LIKE WOE OHO OHO OHHHO OHHHO WOAH OH BA DA DA KINDA FEEL LIKE IT DONT MAKE SENCE CUZ UR BRINGING ME IN AND THEN YOUR KICKING ME OUT AGAIN LOVE SO STRONG, THEN YOU MOVE ONE NOW IM HUNG UP IN SUSPENCE CUZ UR BRINGING ME IN AND THEN UR KICING ME OUT AGAIN ok i went over the limit X3 But i only know what one of those are ----> so im just gonna rate them all XD
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Ok, so i know I'm not really the right person to critic because I fail at run cycles. So I'm going to try to say this nicely, so i don't sound mean D: Though I just wanted to point some things out. First, i think the tail should move, and also the hair a bit. I think you should add another ear, to make it realistic, unless you don't want to o3o If thats the sun in the background, I would say it needs to move little by little. If its a glare, then...ya it should stay there. The eyes are also a bit big. BUT ON THE OTHER HAND I love it! The anatomy is perfect. Hope this helped, and i wasn't to mean D:
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mistystar12553 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Digital Artist
how  do you animate?
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:iconbaypaintpony:
baypaintpony Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014
run firestar run XD
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:iconwarriorkittenartist:
WarriorKittenArtist Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Awsome!! i love firestar!
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:iconrussetstar-lightning:
it's brilliant but there should be trees, dogs and mabye a gorge
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:iconheartglow12:
heartglow12 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
its cool
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:iconzorithehedgehog:
Zorithehedgehog Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
i wish i could do aniamtion :D
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:iconbanitehcatlovah123:
BanitehcatLovah123 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:iconcaramelcat123: ur awesome!
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:iconbanitehcatlovah123:
BanitehcatLovah123 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:iconitssobeautifulplz: its so beautiful!
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:iconrussetstar-lightning:
lol
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:iconmslightningalchemist:
MsLightningAlchemist Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It looks like a wiener cat. Or a ginger ferret. I suggest making the chest a little bigger and the legs a hint longer. ;)
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Selcouth-Kiara Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
and when I said thinner I meant towards the top of the leg not the bottom part but the oval-ish part that attatches to the body
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Rosepetal2011 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
LOVE IT!
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:iconluckylucy99:
luckylucy99 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012   Digital Artist
the grass should move so it looks like he is not running in the same spot ._.
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:iconmofro-know:
Mofro-Know Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011
The anatomy is bad.
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:iconphoenixofthesea:
Phoenixofthesea Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
why he stop?
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FallenTheWolf Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
lol cut
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iceandrain111 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011
hey i say the same thing! :iconbravoplz:
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FallenTheWolf Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
lolz
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iceandrain111 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011
lolz
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Crazii-Angel Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011
I like it alot :3 a dangerous path animation? O: SHHHHHHHHHHH I JUST STARTED READING THAT BOOK >n<
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WolfPawCreator Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012  Hobbyist
so did i! well, about to finish!
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:iconcrazii-angel:
Crazii-Angel Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012
Welp im done with it now ^w^ now im on the 6th book o3o!
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:iconwolfpawcreator:
WolfPawCreator Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Hobbyist
Guess what? I'M ON THE 6TH BOOK TOO!

Finally, someone who won't spill anything about Warriors!
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:iconcrazii-angel:
Crazii-Angel Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012
yay :3 x3 im loving the 6th book so far <3 its epiic o3o
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Krofter Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Student Interface Designer
only the kitty moves. is thats whats suppose to happen??
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Tea-Tigress Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011  Student General Artist
this is a very nice animation! but i would like to say that, it sorta looks like he is running in place. i think that maybe if you added some grass flashing by in some frames it would add a cool afect! but i have never animated before(cause i cant figer out flash!) so what do i know? right.
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coolvulpix Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
but the grass doesnt move it looks like he's running in place ._.
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:iconlemonlime01:
lemonlime01 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011
RUN FOREST RUN XDDD
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:iconladyheart15:
Ladyheart15 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011
OMG!! This is sooooo cute!!! I LOVE FIREHEART SOOO MUCH! I WISH I COULD MARRY HIM!!1!!!111!
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FeathertailRox67 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011
Can I use this for a warrior cats video? I will show you when its finished!
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C-H-I-Z-U Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Nice. c:
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:iconqueenkohai:
queenkohai Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2011  Student Digital Artist
*chasing after him*
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Pinkbubblepop1 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
tail should make a little and i thought the 2 bad legs stayed together and when under the arms...? But I LOVE THIS!!! :D BTW i don't think the eyes are too big because its a style and its adorable. :3
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Pinkbubblepop1 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
tail should make a little and i thought the 2 bad legs stayed together and when under the arms...? But I LOVE THIS!!! :D BTW i don't think the eyes are too big because its a style and its adorable. :3
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sexywhales Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Reminds me of Bone Shatter~
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Boobear96 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is cool, keep going.
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Chradi Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Student General Artist
I only have one thing that bothers me here( I'm not good in anatomy or run cycles but....) the front legs should be closer to the shoulders and maybe arching the back a little more would give it a more dynamic pose.
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Flimingow Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
-watches again-
:D
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:iconflimingow:
Flimingow Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
CARAMEL
we really need to collab sometime,
Cause this is so freaking amazing!
I love your style so much! :heart:
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Caramelcat123 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Y THANKYOU FLIMMY.

And yes, we do.
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:iconflimingow:
Flimingow Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Om nom nom.
BECAUSE OF YOU
ive drawn a load of cat pictures.
mrhumhrrr
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:iconcaramelcat123:
Caramelcat123 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I FEEL LIKE AN INSPIRATION.
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:iconflimingow:
Flimingow Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
-tilts head back-
thats because YOU ARE

-clapclap-
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:iconflimingow:
Flimingow Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Om nom nom.
BECAUSE OF YOU
ive drawn a load of cat pictures.
mrhumhrrr
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PacankaSima Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Realy awesome! :meow:
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:iconmisskittens:
MissKittens Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011
Lol its the run cycle you gave me XDD Lol Firestar looks sooo DETERMINED!!!!!!!!
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:iconcaramelcat123:
Caramelcat123 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's....


...It's not,

I made this from scratch. :iconduhplz:
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:iconmisskittens:
MissKittens Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011
GASP

DUN DUN DUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNN





idk XDD
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chirpings Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
I...was listening to music, and this fit so perfectly with the song XD
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