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FLASH ANIAMTION FTW

Anywhoo, I've been pndering the idea of animating "A Dangerous Path." from teh warrior's series.
and this would be in the opening, I suppose. c:
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Good-
Background
Smoothness

Bad-
Eyes kinda big
Doesn't have another ear
Grass doesn't move

now i have to fit 80 words to finish this so i will type random things
Spam Fork Dog Eat No Oh my gosh I hate my life
SHE'S GOT A LOVE LIKE WOE OHO OHO OHHHO OHHHO WOAH OH BA DA DA KINDA FEEL LIKE IT DONT MAKE SENCE CUZ UR BRINGING ME IN AND THEN YOUR KICKING ME OUT AGAIN LOVE SO STRONG, THEN YOU MOVE ONE NOW IM HUNG UP IN SUSPENCE CUZ UR BRINGING ME IN AND THEN UR KICING ME OUT AGAIN ok i went over the limit X3 But i only know what one of those are ----> so im just gonna rate them all XD
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Ok, so i know I'm not really the right person to critic because I fail at run cycles. So I'm going to try to say this nicely, so i don't sound mean D: Though I just wanted to point some things out. First, i think the tail should move, and also the hair a bit. I think you should add another ear, to make it realistic, unless you don't want to o3o If thats the sun in the background, I would say it needs to move little by little. If its a glare, then...ya it should stay there. The eyes are also a bit big. BUT ON THE OTHER HAND I love it! The anatomy is perfect. Hope this helped, and i wasn't to mean D:
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WarriorKittenArtist Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Awsome!! i love firestar!
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:iconrussetstar-lightning:
it's brilliant but there should be trees, dogs and mabye a gorge
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holiy12345678 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013
its cool
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Zorithehedgehog Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
i wish i could do aniamtion :D
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BanitehcatLovah123 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:iconcaramelcat123: ur awesome!
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BanitehcatLovah123 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:iconitssobeautifulplz: its so beautiful!
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lol
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MsLightningAlchemist Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It looks like a wiener cat. Or a ginger ferret. I suggest making the chest a little bigger and the legs a hint longer. ;)
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Selcouth-Kiara Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
and when I said thinner I meant towards the top of the leg not the bottom part but the oval-ish part that attatches to the body
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Rosepetal2011 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
LOVE IT!
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