Bad- Eyes kinda big Doesn't have another ear Grass doesn't move
now i have to fit 80 words to finish this so i will type random things Spam Fork Dog Eat No Oh my gosh I hate my life SHE'S GOT A LOVE LIKE WOE OHO OHO OHHHO OHHHO WOAH OH BA DA DA KINDA FEEL LIKE IT DONT MAKE SENCE CUZ UR BRINGING ME IN AND THEN YOUR KICKING ME OUT AGAIN LOVE SO STRONG, THEN YOU MOVE ONE NOW IM HUNG UP IN SUSPENCE CUZ UR BRINGING ME IN AND THEN UR KICING ME OUT AGAIN ok i went over the limit X3 But i only know what one of those are ----> so im just gonna rate them all XD
Ok, so i know I'm not really the right person to critic because I fail at run cycles. So I'm going to try to say this nicely, so i don't sound mean D: Though I just wanted to point some things out. First, i think the tail should move, and also the hair a bit. I think you should add another ear, to make it realistic, unless you don't want to o3o If thats the sun in the background, I would say it needs to move little by little. If its a glare, then...ya it should stay there. The eyes are also a bit big. BUT ON THE OTHER HAND I love it! The anatomy is perfect. Hope this helped, and i wasn't to mean D:
this is a very nice animation! but i would like to say that, it sorta looks like he is running in place. i think that maybe if you added some grass flashing by in some frames it would add a cool afect! but i have never animated before(cause i cant figer out flash!) so what do i know? right.
I only have one thing that bothers me here( I'm not good in anatomy or run cycles but....) the front legs should be closer to the shoulders and maybe arching the back a little more would give it a more dynamic pose.