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"Kitten, are you alright?" Kitten's mother, Kini, called through a crack in her bedroom door, "You haven't eaten anything since this morning, and it's getting late."

Kitten mumbled something unintelligable into her pillow and rolled further into the comfort of her bed.

In complete truth, she wasn't alright. She felt horrid.

Earlier that day Kitten had been in a good mood, though, she was posostively chipper. Why, you might ask? Well because today was going to be the best day of her pre-teen life, undoubtedly.

She had wished goodbye to her mother, father, and even her little baby brother, Andre.

She dashed out the door with a flick of her beautiful bushy tail and then she was gone.

Kitten bit her own tounge at the memory. Wincing in pain as she did so, but she deserved it right? Kitten deserved to be punished?
That's what she thought anyway.

When she had gotten to school she had still been happy, she'd been feeling butterflies galervanting in her stomache all morning.
She was about to find him.
Cirian.
The man of her dreams.

Or atleast, that's what she'd thought at the time.

Today was the day she had decided she would finally tell Cirian how she felt.
How she had felt for the past two years she had been attending this school.
From the moment she had set eyes on him.

"Kitten, please come out, you've been cooped up in your room all afternoon, it's not good for you!" Kitten scoffed at her mother's remark, not good for her?
Like that mattered anymore.

When school finally ended she dashed around to the back gate, the gate which Cirian went through to go home.
Her heart lept for a moment when she saw his face, before it plummeted back down with a crash.

"Kitten, sweetie, why won't you answer me?" Kini pestered again. "...It doesn't matter..." Kitten whispered. after a moments silence Kini began to speak again and Kitten cut her off with a scream. "IT DOESN'T MATTER ANYMORE."

After Kitten had seen Cirian that day, things still mattered.

It still mattered to her that her best friend, Kirimi had her lips pressed against those of her dream man's.

It still mattered that Kirimi had completely ignored the fact that it would crush her best friend's heart if she did what it was she was doing now.

What she HAD been doing for a while now.

But after what Kitten did what she did that day, nothing mattered anymore.

"Kitten...?"

She was sure in her head that she deserved to be punished.

"Kitten... p-please calm down and come out now..."

But somehow she felt justified.

"K-KITTEN- WHY ARE YOU-"

No, she HAD been justified. Kirimi got what she deserved.

Cirian too.

Kini saw her daughter turn around drearily as she got up out of bed.
Her legs got shaky and her heart started pounding.

"What's wrong... mother?"

"Kitten you're... you're covered in... in blood..."
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*GASPPPPP* WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT?


Aha, all the inside jokes in this, they make me laugh.

ANYWAY- I told you it was soon, and I delivered, right?

Well, the second chapter will probably be a heap gorier, and what not.

So, heads up, kiddies. XD

(This is actually one of the worst stories I've ever written.)

Oh, and if you post any fanart, I'll be sure to link it... or something. XD


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~KrazyChick369 Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Whens the naext chapter coming out?!! I love it!
<3
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*wilburta8 Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this my fanart i think its awesome but its a little sucky sorry but im proud [link]
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*xX-YuriPop Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Continueeee
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!the3littlekittens31 May 27, 2012  Student Digital Artist
i like it
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Cant wait for the next chapter X3 this story is getting interesting X3
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MOOOOOOAAAR D: !!!!!!
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~Candlefire29 Oct 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Kitten... Kini.. lol.
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~UnessesarySunglasses Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ffffffffff-- i didnt even notice that.
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~Russettip Oct 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
How do make a story? I don't get how to submit it! (Or create it for that matter!)
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~UnessesarySunglasses Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
well, you get a writing program. (I have Openoffice.org. uwu) and then you type the story, and save it as a file on your computer, then upload it.



(WARNING: preview image is needed. owo)
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